deeperwonderment: (Abby Crying)
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Title: The Night Won't Save Anyone
Author: [livejournal.com profile] not_from_stars
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/Characters: Abby, Connor, Becker, Implied Abby/Becker/Connor
Rating/Category: PG-13/Gen
Summary: The dark brings out all of their fears.
Words: 300 (3 100 Word Drabbles)
Notes: These was written for the Phobia challenge at [livejournal.com profile] primeval100





I.

Abby had thought she left her fear of the dark behind when she left behind her childhood -- such as it was. Then the time in the Cretaceous happened and it brought it all back again. The darkness brought new terrors there and this time, the monsters were real. When it got dark, she would do her best to sleep, but the fear wouldn’t go away. There was always the chance an attack would come and they would be prey. She would finally sleep because she had to, even then, she was waiting for the dawn to break the darkness.


***

II.

Connor feared the darkness. It hadn’t bothered him so much back home, where most things made some kind of sense. Stuck here, though, the complete blackness was more suffocating than home. There were no city lights to break it up, nor brightly lit streets to give the illusion of safety.

It wasn’t just the predators that made him afraid of the dark.

What really scared him was when he knew that Abby was so scared she couldn’t sleep. When she was so scared of the night that he could feel her crying silently, and he couldn’t protect her from that.


***

III.

Soldiers weren’t supposed to be afraid of anything. It was a belief he had always lived by and it had gotten him through several rough situations. Showing no fear, convincing his men there was nothing to fear, that’s how he survived and got through from day to day.

Nights were different. Night was when he remembered how badly he had failed the two people who meant the most to him. Night was when he had to face that one more day had passed and he hadn’t found them and brought them home.

Nights scared him like nothing else ever had.


Date: 2011-02-03 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com
Oooooooh. Oooooh, wow. Very good. Love them all.

Date: 2011-02-03 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you! I haven't tried to do drabbles in a long time. :D

Date: 2011-02-03 03:29 pm (UTC)
thelibraniniquity: (This Is A Becker Icon)
From: [personal profile] thelibraniniquity
Oh, wow. These were very intense.

Date: 2011-02-03 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you! I was hoping they'd sound all right.

Date: 2011-02-03 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] textualdeviance.livejournal.com
Oh, my poor angsty woobies!

*squishes them together*

Date: 2011-02-03 04:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Aren't they though? *hugs them, too*

Date: 2011-02-03 05:54 pm (UTC)
aoifes_isle: (Default)
From: [personal profile] aoifes_isle
*wants to hug all three*

Date: 2011-02-03 06:58 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-02-03 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Very intense and angsty! Great drabbles.

Date: 2011-02-03 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2011-02-03 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] woodstock12.livejournal.com
Nicely written.

Date: 2011-02-03 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2011-02-03 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taricha.livejournal.com
:( :( The last one was extra sad :(

Well done!

Date: 2011-02-03 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
I know that one hurt the most when I was writing it.

Thank you!

Date: 2011-02-03 08:52 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Very poignant. All of them

Congratulations on drabbling.

Date: 2011-02-03 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I may try to write more as all of my stuff is usually long. :D

Date: 2011-02-03 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Very intense and lovely.

Date: 2011-02-03 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. :)

Date: 2011-02-04 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
These are great, especially the way the first two link together.

Date: 2011-02-04 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2011-02-04 07:24 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([stock] wolf)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Great drabbles! They certainly pack a punch. And welcome to [livejournal.com profile] primeval100! You now have a shiny new author tag :D

Date: 2011-02-04 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, for the compliment and the welcome. :)

Date: 2011-02-07 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
ooh, great set of drabbles. Meep for all of them.

Date: 2011-02-07 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalscribe.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

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